If you follow cj2017's TSCC fic (and really, you'd be an Ellison not to), then today is the day you've been waiting for... NEW FIC POSTED! It totally rocks.
Much better. When you use the right word in a joke? Much better. (That, and this reader needed a good night's sleep!)
I found myself tripping on unimportant things in the fic, too, but had the good sense not to comment yet, until I read it again (later today) in better mind for recognizing the big picture. I'm finding it difficult to keep track of what alternate universe I'm in; who's supposed to be dead, etc, and what everyone has been up to. This is apparently what it's like to get old.
Re: The curse of literal sticklerism...
I found myself tripping on unimportant things in the fic, too, but had the good sense not to comment yet, until I read it again (later today) in better mind for recognizing the big picture. I'm finding it difficult to keep track of what alternate universe I'm in; who's supposed to be dead, etc, and what everyone has been up to. This is apparently what it's like to get old.